Advertising. Rhymes with surprising.
Feb 06 | Dan, Creative Director
We all love surprises (provided of course they’re pleasant ones!). When we get a nice surprise, we get a nice feeling about its source, whether it’s a person, a place or even a thing. A thing like—well, like an advertisement.
An advertisement can’t be effective unless it’s watched, read or listened to. If it doesn’t grab attention, it won’t make the cash register ring. There are many ways to make an ad attention-getting, but one of my favorites—a device that never ever fails to draw me in—is surprise: that is, something in the ad that’s entirely unexpected or even counterintuitive to the typical advertising sales pitch.
For starters I’ll cite the classic Volkswagen ad from the early 1960’s in which a VW Beetle is shown with the simple headline, “Lemon.” Obviously, the surprise here was an advertiser labeling its own product a lemon, a clunker. Reading this one word, you’re irresistibly drawn into the ad, which describes a microscopic defect in the glove compartment—a defect that would never keep an ordinary car off the lot—but was sufficient to bring this VW back to the manufacturing plant, a testament to Volkswagen’s obsession with quality.
Here’s another gem (pun intended as you’ll see) from my career. Years ago I wrote an ad for a jewelry store announcing a special weekend viewing and sale of high-priced diamonds and jewelry. The least expensive piece was a $20,000 diamond. That got me to thinking, so I wrote an ad headlined, “Our special weekend sale. Diamonds as low as $20,000.” Not too hard to spot the surprise here—“diamonds as low as $20,000? These rocks I gotta see!” And in fact, the jeweler called me the following Monday to tell me my little ad brought in a customer who purchased a $50,000 diamond. I should’ve asked for a percentage.
Recently one of our clients needed a flyer to promote a contest featuring model bridges built by teams of engineering students. If you were asked to imagine such an event, your mind’s eye would probably conjure something along the lines of a chess match in a large, muted room, with groups of brainy kids quietly, nervously huddled around their models. Playing off this stereotype, we created the flyer you see here, with the headline, “Join us for a nice little CUTTHROAT game of bridge.” The copy is almost military in style, describing the competition as “a brute test of engineering strength,” where “The action will be fast and furious.” The copy ends with: “Warning: this event promises to be ferociously competitive. It is not for the faint of heart!”
Obviously we had a little fun here, but I think you’d agree the tone and style of our flyer, given the subject matter, is unorthodox, unusual—surprising. And of course, that’s our intention, to capture the reader’s attention by describing the event in a most unexpected and unusual way. I wouldn’t be surprised to learn that our little flyer helped draw a crowd to the event.
For more examples of (pleasantly) surprising advertising, visit pat-bach.com. See how our clients have used the element of surprise to capture attention, and sales as well.









